Phyllis Babcock Poet Verse

Footprints

Hiding the veil of moon light
Amber gold  sun's rays
*** burst***
Bringing the arc of a new dawn
Glistening  white snow
****reflects***
Like sparkling diamonds
Dotting the landscape 
***shining***
Open skies above
Not a cloud in the sky
***footprints***
Imprinted a pathway
on jewel coated snow.

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Andrea Dietrich March 20, 2015 at 11:13 PM I love the clever formatting of this one!

John Fleming January 21, 2015 at 2:24 PM This is a lovely little poem, Phyllis. It absolutely radiates pure white brilliance...Excellent!! :) john.

Emile Pinet January 21, 2015 at 1:24 PM You have a good sense of rhythm and place feelings into your word choices. Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 21, 2015 at 1:14 PM - Phyllis, beautiful shiny footprints in white snow - Lovely winter picture - hugs // Anne-Lise :)