Notes About The Poem

For Brian Strand's 'No 1299' Poetry Contest

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Footles for the Birds

Let the Fowls Go

Release
three geese

Fowl Abuse

I struck
my duck

Jokester Duck

Chuckling
Duckling

Crazy Bird Resort

The loon
Lagoon

Bird Mystery Novel

Who slew
Cuckoo?

The Welcomed Garden Bird

Again . . .
the wren!

Did you get enough to Drink?

Say when,
Gray wren

Most Revered Ones

Pharaoh’s
Sparrows

Bird Gazette Headline

Blind Larks
find parks

Bird Acquaintances

She knows
three crows
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Goldsmith Avatar
May 15, 2024 at 12:48 PM
Congratulation on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative/fun "Footles for the Birds" write... Have A Blessed Day Writing Away............
Empress Avatar
May 15, 2024 at 12:17 PM
Dear andrea, you amaze me with your creative footles! Glad you entered this one! Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my contests
Schatz Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 8:05 PM
Pharoah's sparrows. Both must be proud.
Kitchin Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 7:13 PM
Andrea, so cute and creative.
Empress Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 10:56 AM
She knows three crows hahah, I struck my duck haha. Gosh you are just beyond intelligent in how you write these footles! Queen you definitely are of these and i think many will agree with me sweet andrea! Youv nailed it and its never a boring one from you, i hope this will score high too! Best wishes for the contest! Sending you light always
Rodgers Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 9:35 AM
Dear Andrea, What a delightful journey through the world of avian imagery, offering a whimsical exploration of birds and their interactions. Each stanza invites readers to ponder the mysteries of nature and the playful dynamics of bird behavior. I loved the repetition of certain phrases adds a rhythmic quality, enhancing the overall flow of the poem. It's a charming piece that leaves a lasting impression. - Blessings, Daniel
Meadows Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 12:17 AM
Well done! A good poem, Andrea.
Cunningham Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 11:54 PM
You're on a roll with these Andrea, best of luck in the contest. Tom
Y. Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 8:38 PM
Wow! Andrea, What a well written string of footless. You are so good at these! I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a wonderful evening-Alexis
Hawley Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 7:08 PM
Marked as a Fav! You are amazing at these footles! You are a "wordy birdy"!
Hind Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 6:26 PM
Interesting take on birds, I enjoyed reading
Rodrigues Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 5:26 PM
You are so good with footles!
Allison Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 5:22 PM
fab string of footles Andrea I've given up writing for his contests as i cant even place with footles for him now lol
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