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Maryam Jameela Haniff

Poet I do not know?

Footle---Dangerous Eyes

Her rainbow eyes

His own demise.

Copyright © Maryam Jameela Haniff | Year Posted 2009

lifei do not know?

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May 2, 2009 at 4:14 PM

Got a smile out of me with this clever poem. I enjoyed it. Much said in just two lines. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind words on mine. Karen

Michael Degenhardt

February 11, 2009 at 5:27 AM

While it's not a true footle, it is a great write. Perfect rhyme and very clear. Michael

Carrie Richards

February 6, 2009 at 12:32 PM

Excellent...I really like this one! ~ Love, Carrie

Christopher Higgins

February 6, 2009 at 12:00 PM

Love this piece..those eyes are killers.

February 6, 2009 at 11:52 AM

Maryam this poem made me laugh - reckon it's because I have worn those very shoes - God Bless, MJ

Deirdre Omaidin

February 6, 2009 at 11:12 AM

fabulous wording but cut it down to 2 syllables in each line and give it a name: Déirdre

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