Footfalls of Fate

F or years as a child he had dark, fitful dreams 
O f narrow, closed passages, places unseen
O ften he mused, they were unfounded fears
T ormented thoughts that would bring him to tears
F orboding terrors and feelings of dread
A puzzling scenario that loomed in his head
L ately the tide in his mind seemed to turn
L ooking ahead for adventure he yearned
S o one day he set out to explore a cavern. 

O ld, unique crystals, grand formations he found
F ossils and rocks, pictographs underground.

F or awhile he was thrilled, quite engaged in his quest
A ll fear forgotten, then lamp died, he cried out in protest
T oo panicked to think, he ran, stumbled and fell
E nsuring his fate, plunged down a deep well...into cold hell. 






Written on 3/8/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 3/9/2018 11:07:00 AM
Great acrostic Laura, best wishes...
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Date: 3/9/2018 6:08:00 AM
A very good acrostic, that rhymes and flows very well...
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Date: 3/9/2018 5:02:00 AM
Brilliant acrostic Laura. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 3/8/2018 11:16:00 PM
Oh, I love the dark twist at the end ... fate, indeed! Very creative Acrostic, Laura, and so intelligently-penned ... enjoyed this thoroughly! :-)
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