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Foot Long Subway

Subway’s foot-long “cold cut trio” is the one for me You know bologna, salami and ham aren’t calorie free? Not to worry; Subway uses turkey meat in all three
ON YOUR FEET Poetry Contest Charlie Sides
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Onclaud Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 6:41 AM
nice, charlie... thanks for entering my contest... please CHECK the syllable count of your last line; should be at least 14 sylls... GO; contest is almost done.. edit and update it in your poem's page..;) huggs!
Sides Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 1:58 PM
Nette I did revise to what I thought was a 14 syllable count. Is it still not 14? Charlie
Onclaud Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 6:49 PM
charles!!... please count syllables of the last line.. it has to be at least 14 but not longer than the 2nd line!..GO!!.. :) huggs!
Sides Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 9:54 PM
Done & done! Thanks Nette
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