Get Your Premium Membership

Foot Long Subway

Subway’s foot-long “cold cut trio” is the one for me You know bologna, salami and ham aren’t calorie free? Not to worry; Subway uses turkey meat in all three
ON YOUR FEET Poetry Contest Charlie Sides

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/31/2012 6:41:00 AM
nice, charlie... thanks for entering my contest... please CHECK the syllable count of your last line; should be at least 14 sylls... GO; contest is almost done.. edit and update it in your poem's page..;) huggs!
Login to Reply
Sides Avatar
Charles Sides
Date: 1/31/2012 1:58:00 PM
Nette I did revise to what I thought was a 14 syllable count. Is it still not 14? Charlie
Date: 1/30/2012 6:49:00 PM
charles!!... please count syllables of the last line.. it has to be at least 14 but not longer than the 2nd line!..GO!!.. :) huggs!
Login to Reply
Sides Avatar
Charles Sides
Date: 1/30/2012 9:54:00 PM
Done & done! Thanks Nette

Book: Reflection on the Important Things