Fool's Gold

I fell in love by fits and starts
We needed time to knit our hearts;
It was your eyes that cast the spell
The promise there I loved too well.
Those tender lips that beckoned me
Should have warned it's time to flee;
Your body's pledge, the promised prize
The hidden hopes concealed in lies.
The words you spoke that made me warm
Could also hurt and hatch a storm.
Love's rocky road runs hot and cold
And what we find may be fool's gold;
For now I know I'm not for you
As love of parts is never true.
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Mcdaid Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 9:54 PM
so very beautifully penned i could feel the sadness i know this feeling bless you
K. Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 9:21 AM
So sad when this happens, but sometimes I guess one just deeply falls, only finding out too late, how it was fool's gold-- I hope I remember right, that is also called pyrite? Wonderful flow and rhythm in your poem, Lizzie.... I hope you are doing well!
Jackson Avatar
April 24, 2014 at 1:59 AM
I love the rhyme and the rhythm. It has good imagery and it is wonderful to read. Best wishes Linda
Effendi Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 7:11 AM
Its always so wonderful to read your poems my dear. It seems that you always find the rights words to convey your thoughts. Marvelous!
A   Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 5:47 PM
Liz, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy the new coming week. Always & Forever! HUGS **LINDA**
Austin Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 8:43 AM
Loved this one before. Congrats on the selection. LOve, daver
Mcconnell Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 3:35 AM
nice write, real towing and throwing throughout giving true ways of love sometimes. well done, God bless you, Gordon
May Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 7:57 PM
very nice write Liz.....best wishes....love
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 3:19 AM
It is always a pleasure to read your poetry Lizzy. I can relate to this poignant piece.
Horne Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 12:59 PM
Enjoying this awesome write again, Lizzy. Hope you're having a great weekend : )
Dietrich Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 7:40 PM
Hey, lizzy still waiting for another new one from you. How are you doing?
Mac Donald Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 2:45 PM
Ah, I did comment on this one before, Elizabeth.:) You think with your heart as much as you do with your head, always outstanding writes by you! Thank you for the last comment, I can remember writing that. I'd just gotten some sad news about my nephew's passing.:( I'd sat at the table looking and listening to the outside. Sometimes things just 'happen'. I had written a Leprechaun poem for Terry; it had been a rush thing, and I'll rarely ever rush through a write. Love you, Mikki
Phillips Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 2:20 PM
this is a neat work of art that tells a facinating story of love.I like the figurative language used in this piece.
A  Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 11:02 AM
a #1 poem in my book~*~SKAT
Austin Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 8:48 AM
Ah! What is back of those sparkling, loving peepers? A large pile of iron pyrite, eh? Love, daver
Bickerstaffe Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 7:51 AM
Lovely flowing couplet rhyming, and an excellent title to head up your theme. I know I always strike REAL gold whenever I visit your pages! Love, Keith
Vresk Avatar
April 11, 2013 at 7:16 PM
Elizabeth,real love will come and knock at your door. I hope you're doing good.I love your poem ,Ivy
Hendricks Avatar
April 11, 2013 at 1:38 PM
Awww, Elizabeth. May this be a work of fiction, my friend. I'm totally gaga over your eloquence. Well done, poetess of note. :)
Horsman Avatar
April 11, 2013 at 9:01 AM
Hi Elizabeth, i've read your poetry from the start,and in my opinion, you are one of the very best on soup, if not the whole world....this is the first where, you give a little a little insight of the hurt you may have received, it is a funny old world, that if i'm right, it shows that it truly does go on to make the best and most sincere of all poetry,, i hope you dont take this comment the wrong way,, because truly i'm your number one fan, and this comment is my sentiment of esteem to you...
Bordner Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 2:00 PM
WOW!!! amazing parable emphasizing the peril in Love - 'Hatch a storm..' thats tastey Lizzie - fool's gold certainly cannot by this wisdom - great teaching here - J.A.B. %
Komala Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 10:54 PM
wow...SUPERB!!!! beautiful...how i adore your charming writes my sweetest sista Elize....enjoyed so very much <3 <3 <3
Neels Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 10:49 AM
Lizzie, just dropping in to say hello and to re-read this gem or yours. hope you are doing good, love Wilma
Williams Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 10:16 AM
Lizzie just back for a re-read of this little beauty...hope you are well...David
Devnath  Avatar
April 6, 2013 at 10:39 AM
Based on sad truth. I liked your tittle much because you have compared nicely without leaving any gape. Loved always, bl
Sathasivam Avatar
April 6, 2013 at 1:59 AM
Excellent. Very truthful write. Great work. Tfs
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