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Foolish Life

A puppet to the strings of senses, dancing we live our life. About transient body we think whole day. Our soul and God eternal, like fools we forget them. ~ 09.06.2021 Written for Waltz Wave contest by Kim Merryman

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Date: 6/26/2021 8:04:00 PM
Great message, Rama! Congrats on your win
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Date: 6/26/2021 3:14:00 PM
Rama, I really liked the message in your waltz wave! It does feel like we're just puppets on a string sometimes and we do tend to forget God in busy times, to our loss. Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 6/26/2021 7:04:00 PM
Thanks Kim for teaching a new poetic form, for my placement and compliment. Have a wonderful weekend. God bless!
Date: 6/9/2021 10:17:00 PM
How true! Well done, Rama:)
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 6/10/2021 6:40:00 AM
Thanks for the well done. Take care, God bless!

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