Rama Balasubramanian Poet Verse

Foolish Life

A
puppet
to
the strings
of senses,
dancing
we
live our
life. About
transient body
we think whole 
day. Our
soul
and God
eternal,
like fools 
we 
forget 
them.
~
09.06.2021
Written for Waltz Wave contest by Kim Merryman 

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Unseeking Seeker June 26, 2021 at 8:04 PM Great message, Rama! Congrats on your win

Kim Merryman June 26, 2021 at 3:14 PM Rama, I really liked the message in your waltz wave! It does feel like we're just puppets on a string sometimes and we do tend to forget God in busy times, to our loss. Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M Rama Balasubramanian June 26, 2021 at 7:04 PM Thanks Kim for teaching a new poetic form, for my placement and compliment. Have a wonderful weekend. God bless!

Joanna Daniel June 9, 2021 at 10:17 PM How true! Well done, Rama:) Rama Balasubramanian June 10, 2021 at 6:40 AM Thanks for the well done. Take care, God bless!