Susann Riedel Poet Verse

Fool

Looking out of the window
Sun is shining, sky is so blue
But why i feel like a fool?
I gave you my heart to take care 
But you?? You destroyed it
Down on my knees, begging you please
Come back to me

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Debbie Guzzi March 3, 2011 at 1:28 PM sad I can remember myself "here" not a pretty picture, love can make a fool out of anyone. Light & Love ;)

Julie Heckman February 3, 2011 at 8:22 AM You've captured the essence of lost love and its pain beautifully. julie

The Situation January 30, 2011 at 3:06 AM been there done that. it hurts. move on. T. S.

Keith Bickerstaffe January 30, 2011 at 1:03 AM Well done, Susann! Most of us have been there at one time or another, still, I hope it isn't based on fact! Best wishes, Keith