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Food For Thought

sweet..like lemons

   sour.....like honey......

     red...like the sky....

  blue...like...money...

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Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 9/4/2008 6:29:00 PM

Wouldn't it be wonderful if people were color blind when they looked at their neighbor. Cute poem, D-nyce. Vince

John Loving Iii

Date: 9/1/2008 1:39:00 PM

what world are you from? but i liked it. cute john

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 9/1/2008 7:49:00 AM

Deneen, I am impressed by your poem. Economy of words is like Ghazals. Extension of meaning like the depth of a sea. Keep it up. Thanks for liking my poem Rewards of Love.

Des Juan Richardson

Date: 8/31/2008 9:12:00 PM

Deneen...I love this piece. The oxymorons here are very colorful and deep. Truly thought provoking. Its great to be back and reading your work again. ~Des Juan

Patricia Langston-Moran

Date: 8/30/2008 6:22:00 PM

Deneen. Thank you for your comment about 'Death of our Love." No...we did not find each other. We are divorced now, but still love each other dearly...a bitter-sweet ending to a 23-year marriage. He is married again. But, we still love. Your poem, Food for Thought" is sweet, concise and deep. Patricia

James Foulk

Date: 8/30/2008 4:45:00 PM

Loved this poem it is a sweet and yet sour poems, excuse the pun. it flowed real well.

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