Food

A starving child cries out for food
 As his distended belly extrudes
 His cries seem to fall on deaf ears
 And he succumbs in hunger's tears

 A young girl think that she's too fat
 So she doesn't keep her food down
 She becomes victim to anorexia's wrath
 Skin and bones is the aftermath

 Other people may  eat to suppress pain
 And are in denial of  their weight gain
 Soon they will become obese
 Many will succumb to this disease

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 7/26/2015 10:18:00 PM
and I see congratulations are in order. Way to go, JOseph.
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Date: 7/23/2015 2:40:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/23/2015 1:28:00 AM
Wonderful poem Joseph,, well penned powerful words,, congrats on ur win!
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Date: 7/23/2015 12:27:00 AM
Joseph, Congratulations on your win, I was amazed by all poem. Forever **SKAT**
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Date: 7/20/2015 10:45:00 PM
WOW, I eat the pain, love this...SKAT
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Date: 7/18/2015 7:54:00 PM
You captured three very different scenarios and sadly, the three together probably comprise more than half of the actual "condition" of the world regarding food. VEry nice entry for the contest, joseph.
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Date: 7/17/2015 8:11:00 PM
Thank you for the entry Joseph. Light & Love
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Joseph May
Date: 7/17/2015 8:40:00 PM
Thanks for the inspiration Debbie...hugs
Date: 7/17/2015 7:32:00 PM
a powerful write on 3 different aspects on food - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx - (final stanza need line 2 should be of)
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Date: 7/17/2015 8:41:00 PM
Thank you Jan...hugs
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