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Folly and Fright of the Fireworks Display

dogs cower, as craven yellow stars circle like collars above their heads fishermen delight in the blue sea air: spectacular jellyfish, tentacles dangling a big kettle of popcorn symbolically popping revolutionary “shots heard round the world” one wish wands, sparkle in fairies’ hands like sand in an hourglass, embers tick tock rockets move the night air in concentric circles. playful children, eyes ignited, break out in raucous laughter

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/16/2016 7:14:00 AM
This is great kim...Congrats!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/17/2016 5:14:00 PM
Thank you, Bonnie!
Date: 6/14/2016 2:58:00 AM
This is beautiful. congratulations.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/17/2016 5:15:00 PM
Thank you, Kai!
Date: 6/13/2016 12:00:00 PM
Beautiful poem my lovely smiling friend drawn with loving colors. A great congrats on your win. Loved always, bl
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/13/2016 12:19:00 PM
Thank you BL! Smiling!
Date: 6/13/2016 11:50:00 AM
A pictorial poem leading to explicit sound in the last line. I could 'hear' the laughter even after the poem's end. Congratulations on your second place win in my Première Contest, Kim. Julia, x
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/13/2016 12:19:00 PM
Thanks so much! Excited! Hugs to you!
Date: 6/13/2016 11:35:00 AM
A lovely write Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/13/2016 12:17:00 PM
Thank you, James!
Date: 6/13/2016 11:22:00 AM
Hi, Kim, back to congratulate you on your awesome 2nd Place win in the 'fireworks for me' Premiere Contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/13/2016 12:17:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sandra! Hugs!
Date: 6/2/2016 8:03:00 PM
wOW< now THAT is great imagery. Very unique. I love it!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/2/2016 8:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea!
Date: 6/2/2016 9:08:00 AM
Wonderful imagery in your varied visions of fireworks, Kim. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/2/2016 12:40:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra! Hugs!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/2/2016 12:39:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra! Hugs!
Date: 6/1/2016 11:13:00 PM
A spectrum of wonderful fireworks...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/1/2016 11:27:00 PM
Thank you, Probir!

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