Folly and Fright of the Fireworks Display

dogs cower, as craven yellow stars circle like collars above their heads fishermen delight in the blue sea air: spectacular jellyfish, tentacles dangling a big kettle of popcorn symbolically popping revolutionary “shots heard round the world” one wish wands, sparkle in fairies’ hands like sand in an hourglass, embers tick tock rockets move the night air in concentric circles. playful children, eyes ignited, break out in raucous laughter
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Jennings Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 7:14 AM
This is great kim...Congrats!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 17, 2016 at 5:14 PM
Thank you, Bonnie!
Neumann Avatar
June 14, 2016 at 2:58 AM
This is beautiful. congratulations.
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June 17, 2016 at 5:15 PM
Thank you, Kai!
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June 13, 2016 at 12:00 PM
Beautiful poem my lovely smiling friend drawn with loving colors. A great congrats on your win. Loved always, bl
Rodrigues Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 12:19 PM
Thank you BL! Smiling!
Ward Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 11:50 AM
A pictorial poem leading to explicit sound in the last line. I could 'hear' the laughter even after the poem's end. Congratulations on your second place win in my Première Contest, Kim. Julia, x
Rodrigues Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 12:19 PM
Thanks so much! Excited! Hugs to you!
Inman Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 11:35 AM
A lovely write Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 12:17 PM
Thank you, James!
Haight Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 11:22 AM
Hi, Kim, back to congratulate you on your awesome 2nd Place win in the 'fireworks for me' Premiere Contest! Hugs, Sandra
Rodrigues Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 12:17 PM
Thanks so much, Sandra! Hugs!
Dietrich Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 8:03 PM
wOW< now THAT is great imagery. Very unique. I love it!!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 8:50 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea!
Haight Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 9:08 AM
Wonderful imagery in your varied visions of fireworks, Kim. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Rodrigues Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 12:40 PM
Thank you, Sandra! Hugs!
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June 2, 2016 at 12:39 PM
Thank you, Sandra! Hugs!
Gupta Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 11:13 PM
A spectrum of wonderful fireworks...
Rodrigues Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 11:27 PM
Thank you, Probir!
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