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smiles without teeth, hands that rub ones back leads to ledges; allowed by words....

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Date: 9/16/2010 7:04:00 PM
The reader can sense the danger of being led astray by a deceptive person, Jessica. I hope you are entering this in Chris's senryu contest. Very nice! Love, Carolyn
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