Follower

smiles without teeth,
hands that rub ones back leads to ledges;
allowed by words....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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September 16, 2010 at 7:04 PM
The reader can sense the danger of being led astray by a deceptive person, Jessica. I hope you are entering this in Chris's senryu contest. Very nice! Love, Carolyn
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