Followed By the Light

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Written on September 8, 2023

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Gentlest souls, promising grace will always win Even through the shadows, there comes an inkling Coloring hopes with feelings, blessed by the light Softly whispering through the loosened darkness Known by a promise to the kindest of hearts

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/6/2023 2:56:00 PM

Even through the shadows, there comes an inkling…wonderful! Congratulations!

Suzette Richards

Date: 10/6/2023 1:32:00 AM

Congratulations, Gina. Thank you for supporting my Hypnagogic Dream contest. In order to claim your prize of the book, DOWNTOWN – Poetic Devices, please soup mail me your e-mail address. Regards, Suzette

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/9/2023 4:24:00 AM

Hi Gina all the best for the contest with this 'light' driven poem which whispers through the loosened darkness, by a promise 'To the kindest of hearts'. I posted a photo on my pink poem, did you perhaps see it. Love Jennifer.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/8/2023 10:39:00 AM

Gina, this is pure loveliness. You have put together such fresh images and used words like "inkling," and "loosened darkness" to create an ambiance of grace. Best wishes for the contest! Hugs and blessings, sweet friend.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 9/8/2023 12:32:00 AM

Beautiful poem. I’m yet to figure out what Iambic pentameter is.

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 9/8/2023 12:11:00 AM

A beautiful poem. Well done.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 9/7/2023 11:46:00 PM

That's really beautiful Gina, A delightful poem. Best wishes SV