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Written on September 8, 2023

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Followed By the Light

Gentlest souls, promising grace will always win
Even through the shadows, there comes an inkling
Coloring hopes with feelings, blessed by the light
Softly whispering through the loosened darkness
Known by a promise to the kindest of hearts
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodrigues Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 2:56 PM
Even through the shadows, there comes an inkling…wonderful! Congratulations!
Richards Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 1:32 AM
Congratulations, Gina. Thank you for supporting my Hypnagogic Dream contest. In order to claim your prize of the book, DOWNTOWN – Poetic Devices, please soup mail me your e-mail address. Regards, Suzette
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September 9, 2023 at 4:24 AM
Hi Gina all the best for the contest with this 'light' driven poem which whispers through the loosened darkness, by a promise 'To the kindest of hearts'. I posted a photo on my pink poem, did you perhaps see it. Love Jennifer.
Kauffman Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 10:39 AM
Gina, this is pure loveliness. You have put together such fresh images and used words like "inkling," and "loosened darkness" to create an ambiance of grace. Best wishes for the contest! Hugs and blessings, sweet friend.
Seeker Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 12:32 AM
Beautiful poem. I’m yet to figure out what Iambic pentameter is.
Meadows Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 12:11 AM
A beautiful poem. Well done.
Volumes Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 11:46 PM
That's really beautiful Gina, A delightful poem. Best wishes SV
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