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Follow Through

Blank sheet, taunting me Daring the person I used to be To blurt it out, let words flow free But too deep into my insecurity I have drowned, no hope for me What happened to my pen and pad therapy My safe place, infiltrated by doubt Nothing from within, brave enough to come out Generic pairings of letters seeking clout Simple ramblings, who knows what they’re about Any ounce of approval, no matter the amount Rusty thoughts like the abandoned Tin Man Cobwebbed brain needing “oil can” Hoping out there is just one fan Follow through, girl, you made a plan

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Jessica Renee Dawson

Date: 1/11/2020 8:58:00 PM

My favourite line is: "What happened to my pen and pad therapy" it resonates! I find sometimes the written word flowing from us is our closest friend and counsellor.

Robert Kinard

Date: 1/2/2020 7:09:00 AM

I would like to hear this one at a poetry reading. Very nice.

Jessica Renee Dawson
Date: 1/11/2020 8:56:00 PM

Hey you're right! I would like to too!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/28/2019 8:38:00 AM

Let me know when you post a new piece. Blessings Rick.

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 10/23/2019 3:53:00 PM

Beautifully written. I love it.

Tara Dawn
Date: 12/27/2019 7:21:00 PM

That means so much!! Thank you!

Elaine Perrin

Date: 10/23/2019 12:00:00 PM

Well you’ve definitely got one fan ;-) This is a fantastic first poem Tara and welcome x

Tara Dawn
Date: 12/27/2019 7:18:00 PM

Ohmygoodness. That means so very much. Thank you!! Smiling so big now!! Will definitely be checking your writing out as well. Happy New Year

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/18/2019 11:51:00 AM

Welcome to the soup. I am impressed by your first two pieces. Do drop by for a visit. ;0)

Tara Dawn
Date: 12/27/2019 7:17:00 PM

Thank you so very much. I absolutely will be checking your stuff out. Now that I’ve survived the holidays, I should have a bit more time here.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 10/7/2019 10:43:00 PM

Tara Dawn, So nice to find this poem today. "Rusty thoughts like the abandoned Tin Man Cobwebbed brain needing “oil can” I think that's so brilliant. Welcome to the Soup... -Richard

Tara Dawn
Date: 10/7/2019 10:46:00 PM

Thank you. I think I’m gonna like it here.

Silent One

Date: 10/7/2019 2:50:00 PM

this is really deep and emotive, the language you used takes the reader to a dark place..

Tara Dawn
Date: 10/7/2019 3:34:00 PM

Probably bc the writer is in a dark place. Thank you <3