Follow Through

Blank sheet, taunting me 
Daring the person I used to be 
To blurt it out, let words flow free 
But too deep into my insecurity 
I have drowned, no hope for me 
What happened to my pen and pad therapy

My safe place, infiltrated by doubt 
Nothing from within, brave enough to come out 
Generic pairings of letters seeking clout 
Simple ramblings, who knows what they’re about 
Any ounce of approval, no matter the amount 

Rusty thoughts like the abandoned Tin Man 
Cobwebbed brain needing “oil can” 
Hoping out there is just one fan 
Follow through, girl, you made a plan
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dawson Avatar
January 11, 2020 at 8:58 PM
My favourite line is: "What happened to my pen and pad therapy" it resonates! I find sometimes the written word flowing from us is our closest friend and counsellor.
Kinard Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 7:09 AM
I would like to hear this one at a poetry reading. Very nice.
Dawson Avatar
January 11, 2020 at 8:56 PM
Hey you're right! I would like to too!
Lamoureux Avatar
December 28, 2019 at 8:38 AM
Let me know when you post a new piece. Blessings Rick.
Radhakrishna Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 3:53 PM
Beautifully written. I love it.
Dawn Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 7:21 PM
That means so much!! Thank you!
Perrin Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 12:00 PM
Well you’ve definitely got one fan ;-) This is a fantastic first poem Tara and welcome x
Dawn Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 7:18 PM
Ohmygoodness. That means so very much. Thank you!! Smiling so big now!! Will definitely be checking your writing out as well. Happy New Year
Lamoureux Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 11:51 AM
Welcome to the soup. I am impressed by your first two pieces. Do drop by for a visit. ;0)
Dawn Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 7:17 PM
Thank you so very much. I absolutely will be checking your stuff out. Now that I’ve survived the holidays, I should have a bit more time here.
Theraven Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 10:43 PM
Tara Dawn, So nice to find this poem today. "Rusty thoughts like the abandoned Tin Man Cobwebbed brain needing “oil can” I think that's so brilliant. Welcome to the Soup... -Richard
Dawn Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 10:46 PM
Thank you. I think I’m gonna like it here.
One Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 2:50 PM
this is really deep and emotive, the language you used takes the reader to a dark place..
Dawn Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 3:34 PM
Probably bc the writer is in a dark place. Thank you <3
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