Collin Naicker Poet Rhyme

Follow My Whispers

Listen, Oh Listen, so softly it said     
             Open your heart now, Magical days lie ahead
             Gentle follow my whispers, so light and temperate like the fire fly
             Flickering and sparking in the night sky

             Feel, Oh Feel my affectionate and tender care
             And follow my whispers if you dare
             My love ever so graceful by your side
             Comforting you in days of despair and divide

              See, Oh See, my guiding light 
              Giving you strength to take flight
              And follow my whispers that fill your ears
              And I will never let you go, no matter how dark the years

              Love, Oh Love, all that is dear to you
              And this love ten times will return to you
              And follow my whispers even if it leads you in the dark
              And trust my guidance and you will no doubt leave your mark.

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Denise Retro November 5, 2013 at 5:16 AM that was just gorgeous....

Poet Destroyer A June 22, 2013 at 11:48 AM wow, I can feel the passion in your whispers... love the guidance and trail left behind by the beauty in this image... magic~ LUV~ LINDA

Poet Destroyer A June 22, 2013 at 11:47 AM Hi Collin, "Welcome to the poetry soup. I'm stopping by to invite you on over to my latest contest -- I'm hoping you will consider the enjoyment and challenges we offer on this site. Please consider my contest. You can find the contest page on the top left hand side. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Today I will start by reading all you have posted this far.. Hoping to become a follower and a friend to your poems, and persona. Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"

Anne-Lise Andresen June 20, 2013 at 9:03 AM Hey, Collin ! - Pleased to read your first poem in the P-Soup! - You write very well. - Welcome to P-Soup, hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your thoughts and words here with us :) - Here it is: give to get, comments - then you will get feedback on your writing - I love get feedback on what I write. - Wish you luck my "new friend" - Have fun with poetry! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Skat A June 20, 2013 at 8:11 AM Good morning Collin, a wonderful poem, filled with beauty to follow. I love the light that guides your path., Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT