Follow Me

Follow me, for a minute
Try to feel me, for a few
Right now, I need you
To see the world through
My view
So check your vision
Take a look at the television
And tell me
Is that a pretty picture

We hurt ourselves
Because we hate ourselves
Never given the capacity to love
We can’t tame ourselves
So then we shame ourselves
Trying to be
Crooks and thugs
Then we shrug
And ask “where is the love”
Where is it
It was never given 
You can’t tell,
If it ever existed

So we turn on each other
For economic gain
And every opportunity
To expand our names
When people need food
Children need water
Mothers left alone
When babies need fathers
While others
Sit on what they have
Teens and young adults
Shot and stab
For money 
And hood supremacy

Then everybody is dying
Everyday
People of every age
From cancer, HIV and AIDS
What do you say
Why don’t you raise
Your awareness
Because you can’t look me in the eye
And say you are satisfied
Nor should you be
Not if you see what I see

It’s not all bad
But we don’t sit back 
Until it comes to be
A world filled
With pain and misery
That is not what’s good
But it is what’s real
If only we could feel
Compassion
Add,
And develop the capacity
To love
For the sake
Of our welfare
To save ourselves
From
Ourselves

Instead of sitting back
With unconcerned eyes
And watch the demise
Of our lives
Let us press for one mission
With one vision
To bridge,
The divide
Unite

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/31/2010 6:54:00 PM
Jordan, congrats on your featured poem of the week. Hope you are enjoying the new year. May you be blessed with a wonderful & joyful New Year! Take care*Luv~SKAT
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Date: 12/28/2010 8:18:00 AM
Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Thanks for sharing this with us and have a wonderful week ahead. Love always, Adeleke
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Date: 12/27/2010 9:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Jordan. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/19/2010 11:34:00 AM
...You see, a lot of what revolves around so many of us. My big brother was in a gang, and im sure, that if it wasnt for him getting out, and making me promise i never would be, i woulda gotten jumped in by now...still think about it somedays, when shit at home gets too rough. id like to think about, what kinda other family i could make...but thanks to my bro, i know that, well it isnt at great as some try to make it sound. thanks for this poem, it shows alot. real deep man. ~Princess
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Date: 10/19/2010 9:13:00 AM
Poem relevant to much of what is happening today...Sara
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