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Foliage Dreams

Wafting in the breeze, Wilted dreams...to be a bird: Leaf aspirations.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/23/2010 6:39:00 AM
I read both your last two haikus,they're both awesome but Raul,im in love with this bird here,yes in that leaf of your pic i see the bird wafting in the breeze flying free. The feeling is beautiful,i can relate to your haiku: ),going to my favz-i give you first place in Raul's contest :)Charma.
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