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Fold Away Memories

Engulfed by the waves of despair drowning in the memories of what they once shared fearful of feelings that came to lay claim words uttered in anger of who is to blame Like a rabbit caught in a snare empty souls lay there trembling waters ripple at the suns caress like a scorned woman who's soul is laid bare the silent breeze against her skin where echoes lie dormant of what could have been. fold away memories clear your mind gone is the past leave it behind.

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Date: 9/23/2017 7:30:00 PM
Klio love the last Stanza. Great thought and advice.
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Date: 9/24/2017 11:03:00 AM
Thank you Michael appreciate the comments.
Date: 9/13/2017 8:32:00 AM
Great imagery and thanks for the nice comment
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Date: 9/15/2017 11:56:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 9/12/2017 5:48:00 PM
This was a very lovely poem. I like the ending especially, gone is the past, leave it behind. Wonderful!
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Date: 9/13/2017 2:49:00 AM
Thank you Andrea. Appreciate the comment.
Date: 9/12/2017 6:41:00 AM
A beautiful poem--lovely lines--flow together wonderfully--well done Kilo!
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Date: 9/12/2017 1:22:00 PM
Cheers Vijay
Date: 9/12/2017 4:12:00 AM
I love this poem,, Klio
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Date: 9/12/2017 1:22:00 PM
Thank you Solomon
Date: 9/11/2017 1:59:00 PM
"Gone is the past" nothing will ever change it. A deep write "memories" Klio:)
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Date: 9/12/2017 2:41:00 AM
Thank you, Tahira. Yes the past now gone.

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