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Foghorn

I was an inscrutable, capricious mystery writer, like a pure mystery of days; And I had composed best selling novels, like westering sun's scarlet phase. An unparalleled passion for writing, had for quite long been the motivation, Behind novels which captured hearts, like pink clouds, drifting in formation. My office desk faced the picture window, near the border of riotous blooms; And sunny views enriched often eager eyes, owing to birds of many plumes. Friends were a forever force in my life, like the natural floods of floundering, Or as sun and moon meet in an eclipse, darkening heyday, with no warning. Fairy-like forests, and fields of colored flowers, flamed with furious abandon, Frequently, as fulgent family found one, to dazzle brighter than amber sun! I lived in the house of mist mysteries, in haze shrouded, mighty mountains; And each cherry dawn doled surprises, like roving redbirds in the thousands. So sleepy in sun-drenched summer, my silent street was stained with hues, In new modern, stylish, songbird days, like a gold treasure you cannot lose. Neighbors would navigate narcissistic night, bearing an apple pie, or a joke; Sharing fun and noisy laughter, like a blue undersea volcano, magma awoke. Birds swept peaks of sculpted, stunning mountains, in the hot, daisy season, And sky and the earth merged twice a day, in affinity hues of love cohesion. The naked man orchid shivered with breezes, like quivery trees of November, And Johnny Jump Up puckered at lemon sun, like a sour taste remembered. In a sapphire sea near the mountains, a friend and I set out sailing one day, As a youth follows wildest, golden dreams. Yet, heavy fog descended to stay. Were we heading for wide open water, or drifting to shores of purple flowers? That danger held a lovely mystery, like adventure during the nighttime hours. Hour after rosy hour, we were drifting blind. Our motor had long since died; Like green butterflies, questing for hours, in a place pink daisies lately cried. We were afraid of being lost forever, so Pearl and I joined hands and prayed, Also praying for our downhearted families, if fate's hand would not be stayed. After many anxious, vagrant moments, a foghorn sounded, loud and so near; Our desperate prayers were answered, by the voice of our Savior, very dear!
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Goldsmith Avatar
February 17, 2024 at 11:49 AM
I enjoyed reading your "Foghorn" write. They sure can be loud. Love your ending... Have a great day....................
Buehler Avatar
February 17, 2024 at 6:05 PM
I'm so delighted that you shared your pleasure in this tale with me. Thank you very much.
Conn Avatar
February 15, 2024 at 8:13 PM
Ouch!
Buehler Avatar
February 16, 2024 at 12:44 PM
Best wishes.
Rodgers Avatar
February 13, 2024 at 5:07 AM
Dear Evelyn, Your poem is a delightful journey through your life, a panaramic landscape created with words. Your passion for writing shines through. I can almost feel the sun on my face in and hear the "noisy laughter" of your neighbors. The natural world plays such a beautiful role. I loved the sweet relief of the foghorn, such a powerful metaphor for answered prayers. The love for your friends, family, and even the birds that brighten your day, it's all there. So much to be thankful for! Blessings, Daniel
Buehler Avatar
February 13, 2024 at 1:33 PM
I am touched by your appreciation of this tale, my friend. Thank you very much for all of the lovely things you had to say about it, which bring smiles and happiness. Many blessings.
Andresen Avatar
February 11, 2024 at 11:12 AM
- Yes, this was quite an adventure ... excellently written Evelyn :) - hugs
Buehler Avatar
February 11, 2024 at 1:13 PM
My deepest thanks to you, Anne-Lise. hugs :)
Buhagiar Avatar
February 11, 2024 at 1:19 AM
Amazing poem. An adventure to be enjoyed and a finale that gives credit to prayer to God who always listens to us. Magnificent.
Buehler Avatar
February 11, 2024 at 1:08 PM
Thank you. Your words add sparkle and smiles to my day.
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February 10, 2024 at 10:53 PM
Oh wow, now you're in the era of a majestic novelist! Such a breathtaking poem this is, once again, beautiful Evelyn, your artistic skills of storytelling are like brilliant diamonds radiating flawless shine with their jeweled smile.. Love the descriptions throughout and how you've painted the scene of being lost in the sea, finally the prayers were heard and hopes were rescued..Amazing imagery and as always your use of nature is absolutely mesmerizing. Keep writing and shining always, love this
Buehler Avatar
February 11, 2024 at 1:03 PM
Deepest heartfelt thanks for your wonderful compliments, dear Hiya. It's so great to know that you loved this latest tale. I hope your day is filled with happiness. :)
One Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 10:00 AM
Your poem is a captivating odyssey through the realms of mystery, friendship, and the transformative power of faith. It invites readers to embark on a journey of discovery, where every twist and turn holds the promise of adventure and enlightenment.... Loved it..
Buehler Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 12:54 PM
Thank you so much. Your words bring sunshine into my day. :)
Pandit Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 5:23 AM
Mesmerizing story, my friend. Fabulous images you convey through this word painting. Excellent as always, Evelyn.
Buehler Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 12:51 PM
Thank you for the lingering delight of your comment, Vijay. Blessings.
Greenhough Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 4:33 PM
Thanks for this breathtaking poem. I'm glad the ocean trip ended well. This one held my attention as the drama unfolded.
Buehler Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 12:49 PM
Thank you for your thoughtful, kind remarks, Hilda. :)
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