Foggy Morn

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Oh! Foggy morn cloud that hovers
       Close to mother earth's ground
Surrounded by mist and moisture
       No visibility found

Cows out grazing enjoy green grass
       Many cars and trucks move
Headed here and there, life goes on
       Danger lurks _please remove
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 11:16 PM
You are a true observer of nature out in the country, Sara. Keep up your great poetry!
Sweetheart Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 10:41 PM
A PERFECT PICTURE RESONATES THRU THESE LINES SARA .. WE HAD SUCH A DAY HERE WITH MISTY CLOUDS AND HEAVY TRAFFIC RUMBLING .. INTERESTING VIEW TO IMAGINE LUV ..
Lamoureux Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 4:22 PM
You see so much even when it is foggy, as always well done. You take lovely photos with your mind.
Onclaud Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 12:33 PM
ohh, i like the movement, imagery and overall feel to this awesome write!...not foggy but bright write, sara... fascinating view from here!..:) huggs!
Kovrlija Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 12:14 PM
Vivid description!
Cayton Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 7:46 AM
Just me, enjoying your poetry this morning. Take care and God bless ya Sara, Cindy
Sivey Avatar
November 12, 2012 at 5:10 PM
Your description is so very vivid and delightful my friend! You have brushed up on your foggy images I see and created a masterful poem here Sara! What a fanciful piece, quite the elaborate poem, Great Work!!
A   Avatar
November 12, 2012 at 4:58 PM
Sara, wow... you got yourself a foggy image... ha ha.. I can't see you... How about them cows, gazing the green... love the verse and image... always~pd
Kendrick Avatar
November 12, 2012 at 5:08 PM
We could not see ten feet in front of us on our road trip this morning..I went to get nuke today..Sara
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