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Foggy Morn

. Oh! Foggy morn cloud that hovers Close to mother earth's ground Surrounded by mist and moisture No visibility found Cows out grazing enjoy green grass Many cars and trucks move Headed here and there, life goes on Danger lurks _please remove

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2012 11:16:00 PM

You are a true observer of nature out in the country, Sara. Keep up your great poetry!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/13/2012 10:41:00 PM

A PERFECT PICTURE RESONATES THRU THESE LINES SARA .. WE HAD SUCH A DAY HERE WITH MISTY CLOUDS AND HEAVY TRAFFIC RUMBLING .. INTERESTING VIEW TO IMAGINE LUV ..

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/13/2012 4:22:00 PM

You see so much even when it is foggy, as always well done. You take lovely photos with your mind.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/13/2012 12:33:00 PM

ohh, i like the movement, imagery and overall feel to this awesome write!...not foggy but bright write, sara... fascinating view from here!..:) huggs!

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 11/13/2012 12:14:00 PM

Vivid description!

Cindy Cayton

Date: 11/13/2012 7:46:00 AM

Just me, enjoying your poetry this morning. Take care and God bless ya Sara, Cindy

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/12/2012 5:10:00 PM

Your description is so very vivid and delightful my friend! You have brushed up on your foggy images I see and created a masterful poem here Sara! What a fanciful piece, quite the elaborate poem, Great Work!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/12/2012 4:58:00 PM

Sara, wow... you got yourself a foggy image... ha ha.. I can't see you... How about them cows, gazing the green... love the verse and image... always~pd

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/12/2012 5:08:00 PM

We could not see ten feet in front of us on our road trip this morning..I went to get nuke today..Sara