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Foggy Hollow

The foggy hollow reverberates with rooster's echoes Cackling hens sing a laying tune Biddies for their true beau Horizonal wispy white clouds Lie upon the blue sky Birds of the morn sing love's refrain So in love you and I The sun cast a lavender glow Upon those wispy clouds Like a cold morning in winter When the birds don't sing loud As the sun continues to rise A fireball cut in half Sending red sunbeams through the trees Printing a lithograph The radiant orange beach ball Floats in the eastern sky Bringing warmth like chicken soup or the gleam in a man's eye

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 5/12/2014 9:40:00 AM
Hi Sara, I adored this. The way you describe beauty is just wonderful As if you are the painter exclusively for nature. Emotions versed beautifully here.All said perfectly. Thank you for sharing this write with us. Thanks for visiting too my friend. Peace, Deborah
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Date: 4/23/2014 3:49:00 PM
Enjoyed this very much. Love the title Foggy Hollow...I am from West Virginia and there are plenty of those around here.
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Date: 4/12/2014 4:07:00 PM
love this heart warming write, Sara
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Date: 4/12/2014 1:35:00 AM
Hi Sara. Luv your work; descriptive and real. You have a gift--a talented wordsmith and imagist. Drop by anytime hugs mel :)
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Date: 4/11/2014 3:38:00 PM
So much beautiful imagery in this delightful poem, dear Sara. I especially enjoyed the fourth verse - extraordinary metaphor with the lithograph. I smiled and chuckled reading the last verse. Indeed, the some provides "warmth like chicken soup" and seems to "gleam." Well done, my friend! Love, carolyn
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