Sara Kendrick Poet Couplet

Fog Reviving

Awaking to painful swollen hands, feet, and legs
Thoughts fill head of what to prepare for breakfast_some eggs?

Go to prepare me some coffee to sit on porch
Just few minutes to linger in God's love before sun scorch

Wonderful foggy morn glad I am not driving
Thick fog could cut with knife for me fog reviving

A golden sun sends beams radiating through fog
Doves coo for a long while other birds chip_no crickets_frogs

Slowly reality sets in my morn begins
Some breakfast has to be prepared life's tasks start once again

Thank you for a time on the porch of peace quiet
To jot down few thoughts before the days noise unquiet  

Something called poulter's measure
12/14 syllables per line in rhyming couplets
Inspired by Francine's contest not an entry

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Jack Horne August 13, 2012 at 2:23 PM very much enjoyed reading this one, my friend - I love to see life from your porch

Doris Culverhouse August 12, 2012 at 8:03 PM enjoyed reading today...

Nette Onclaud August 10, 2012 at 6:45 PM seems everything is on track, sara... well illustraeted piece... i iike!.:)

Richard Palmer August 10, 2012 at 12:37 PM great write Sara,thanks for sharing the info

Andrea Dietrich August 10, 2012 at 12:26 PM this is a very nice description of how you start your day. i think I will try to do a humorous entry since I hate mornings so much. haha. Hope this does well in the contest. Luv, Andrea

Andrea Dietrich August 10, 2012 at 12:26 PM oh, and I see you used poulter's measure. Nice touch!

Russell Sivey August 10, 2012 at 10:13 AM I enjoyed your glorious write that I have read this afternoon! I just love foggy mornings, they give me the chills from its great beauty! It's a beautiful sight to behold when you see a good fog, as long as you don't have to drive in it of course! A good morning you describe here! I loved it! Awesome Work!!