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PENTASTITCH IT Poetry Contest -Verse form

Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud

Date: 29-10-2025

 

FOG OF MIDNIGHT

Coal black night
wrapped in bleached blanket
under the clear skies
stared eyes go dim and deadly
anaemic

Words go mute
off the cuff raised hand
to bid her farewell
stayed in dark softly as a
man in fog

Place: 1st
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Banerjee Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 8:22 PM
I love this piece! Congratulations!
Venkata Ramana Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 9:47 AM
Thank you so much for the compliments.
Dietrich Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 11:28 AM
Congratulations, Patri. Well done
Venkata Ramana Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 9:46 AM
Thank you so much for the best compliments.
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