Charles Messina Poet Verse

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Six and Seven Poetry Contest Sponser- Nette Onclaud (4-20-2026)

Fog In Those Eyes

As I'm looking at my laptops glare 
I see that there is someone there
I can't see any eyes or nose
But I can see ears, I suppose 
Little did I know, it was he 
The laptops glare was a glare of me!

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Andrea Dietrich April 29, 2026 at 1:23 PM Fun and clever, Charlie . Congrats

sara Etgen-Baker April 21, 2026 at 5:37 PM humorous....enjoyed, wishing you well

Sara Kendrick April 21, 2026 at 4:49 PM Creative and humorous. Way to go. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich April 20, 2026 at 4:27 PM Haha. You are a hoot, Charles. Love this Charles Messina April 20, 2026 at 4:52 PM So, they say... lol Thanks, Andrea!

Paula Goldsmith April 20, 2026 at 12:31 PM I love this fun/creative write. It was a joy to read. "Good Luck" I did, "BRACELET OF STARS." Have a lovely day writing away............ Charles Messina April 20, 2026 at 4:52 PM Thank you so much, Paula. I always appreciate your lovely comments. :)

Susan Ashley April 20, 2026 at 12:20 PM Dear Charlie, I was charmed by the revelation of your last line :) Was the "glare" a glow or a scowl? I hope it was a harmless glow that put a "fog in those eyes". Wonderful poetry. Warmest wishes, my poet friend.. ~Susan Charles Messina April 20, 2026 at 4:34 PM Hello Dear, Susan. Well, I can tell you one thing...it sure is aglow after your wonderful comments :) So nice to see you again! Thanks always for your warm wishes...backatcha dear, friend! ~Charlie