Fog

Solid
Charcoal gray clouds
Light rain falls, changes, pours
Soft yellow butterflies hidden
Today

butterflyweathercinquain

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Andrea Dietrich

October 11, 2017 at 10:43 PM

This is pretty , Sara. Soupmail for you

Sara Kendrick

October 12, 2017 at 7:07 AM

Andrea, I have answered you mail and commented on the poem..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Russell Sivey

October 11, 2017 at 8:56 AM

I love a good fog, it always inspired me to write, almost as much as the moon does...but the moon will always win out...especially when it shines into the fog! I do like the little yellow butterflies this time of year, they are beautiful! This poem is fantastic! I really enjoyed reading it this morning! Great Work my friend!!

Sara Kendrick

October 12, 2017 at 7:06 AM

We have had plenty of fog this week and a lot of humidity it feels like summer instead of autumn..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always uplifting..Sara