Fog

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Where do butterflies go when it rains?

Solid Charcoal gray clouds Light rain falls, changes, pours Soft yellow butterflies hidden Today

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/11/2017 10:43:00 PM

This is pretty , Sara. Soupmail for you

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/12/2017 7:07:00 AM

Andrea, I have answered you mail and commented on the poem..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/11/2017 8:56:00 AM

I love a good fog, it always inspired me to write, almost as much as the moon does...but the moon will always win out...especially when it shines into the fog! I do like the little yellow butterflies this time of year, they are beautiful! This poem is fantastic! I really enjoyed reading it this morning! Great Work my friend!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/12/2017 7:06:00 AM

We have had plenty of fog this week and a lot of humidity it feels like summer instead of autumn..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always uplifting..Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/10/2017 9:55:00 AM

Beautiful imagery in this poem--apt description of fog!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/10/2017 2:50:00 PM

Vijay, Your presence at my poems is uplifting..I appreciate you reading and taking time to comment..Sara