Fog

fog in mind, i have been there, brain damage got me yeh, 15 years to get away, shut up brain, now speak you may, onetime! re: Russell Sivey 'Fog Creeping in' Don race horse kicked me in the head, lame 4 a week the boss had said, dented me forehead double vision fed, but im alright cor strike me dead:) sometimes....

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 8/16/2013 7:37:00 PM

rhyme time,,,,, I had my left side jaw shattered as doc put it, split lip down thru chin, teeth broken & wired shut 4 eight weeks, from someone wrecking my 65 chevy. This is a great rhyme ;} glad you liked my THE RIDE ;}

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 8/9/2012 8:02:00 PM

You can rhyme just about anything, Don, and make it so dang funny! The horse was lame for a week? You seem to have done a total recovery!:) Best wishes, Mikki

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/9/2012 5:21:00 PM

ha ha, you are quite the funny one my friend! I hope your noggin has cleared by now and you can function correctly! You sure can write these clever writes so I'm sure your head has lost its fog! Great Work!!