Fog

Fog gray, wet Hiding, surrounding, revealing Mountains, forests, deer, bear Growling, leaping, eating Mysterious, dangerous water

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/20/2013 7:51:00 PM

Debbie, , Congratulations on your Diamente~ xox~ LINDA :)

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 11/16/2013 2:45:00 PM

Very unusual transition, Debbie, reminds me of the crocodiles of Africa lunging out of the water, very inspired, congratulations on your win.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/16/2013 2:30:00 PM

Interesting opposing forces..Great winning work..Way to go..Congrats..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/15/2013 3:18:00 AM

love the changing tide of the elements, debbie.. sweet winning cheers to you, ..:) huggs

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 11/14/2013 11:52:00 PM

Ah, an air of mystery- nicely done Debbie! Congrats on your win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/14/2013 11:39:00 PM

enjoyed seeing this one again. Looks like you did like me and used the one from that contest long ago! Congrats Debs. Did you see the new comments at that one blog? Good grief. One guy says I should get a job. I already have one!!!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/14/2013 5:01:00 AM

more congratulations cool lady xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/13/2013 10:07:00 PM

Congrats on the win in my contest and thanks for participating, debbie

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/13/2013 8:51:00 PM

I like your choice beginning and end words...and the way you blended them, good job with this form...congrats on your win :) hugs

Reneice Mowatt

Date: 12/18/2011 12:52:00 PM

thanks for your advice! nice diamonte!

Honesty Oimbo

Date: 11/28/2011 3:16:00 AM

it is a funny poem, so i think

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 11/28/2011 3:03:00 PM

so do I

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 11/27/2011 4:39:00 PM

Wow! What a description of scenery! An enchanting poem.Thanks for the feelings expressed on my poem The Autumn and your friendly advice. I have painted a picture of gloom and you have presented me a red rose of hope. Very kind of you, Debbie. I am really overwhelmed. However, it may sound depressing but the reality is that once the season of sorrows is hosted it doesn't depart. About 7 years ago someone I love hurt me badly. The wound doesn't heal, many seasons have come and gone. Rgds -Mohammad

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/27/2011 3:42:00 PM

Hi, debs. I can see the water leaping, but not eating. maybe I got wrong how to do these.Anyway, I really enjoyed the lines on the fog and the way the last line turned into water!