Fog

Fog on the mountain Totally shroud in a cloud One ray of sunshine (This came to me today as I watched Daystar TV--Worship Videos. This is how I feel sometimes totally confused but then I see God. )

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/25/2009 9:47:00 AM

I could just picture that ray of sunshine brightening those clouds--very beautiful haiku & it does make me experience God whenever I see images like that :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/23/2009 7:25:00 PM

Lovely haiku, Sara. Somehow, for me I see the beacon of a lighthouse guiding me to shore. They appear to be "mountains" from offshore and following one home during a storm one night was the only way I could reach land in the turbulent stormy waters. And I must agree with Cecil; this is very inspirational! Love, Carolyn

Cecil Hickman

Date: 7/23/2009 5:59:00 PM

an inspirational haiku,which describes what most of us feel at least once if not more in our lives,,,Thank you for visiting my poems and reading and leaving comments upon my poetry,,,blessings.Cecil