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Focus Reality

Dream beast arises Pink and blue fog, masks view Destruction awaits For Raul's contest thanks for the inspiration!!

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/20/2010 6:25:00 AM

A wonderful Haiku for the contest and good luck.. very descriptive with awesome words and title... my entry is alba di attesa (Italian translation for Awaiting Dawn).. hope Raul continues to inspire us all with his photos and contests... thankxxx for your many special comments on my poetry too Doris..appreciated..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/19/2010 4:33:00 PM

Interesting direction that you have gone with this one. Should do well in the contest. Good luck. Keep the creative pen flowing. Glad that you like the last Haiku on "Fisherman". Mom

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/19/2010 9:14:00 AM

Hey, I like this. The ominous appeals to me! Luv, Andrea