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FOCUS an artifice   of  endeavour precise candid & confiding quietly in unobtrusive       clarity a focus mirrored in unshowy   lucidity in calm equanimity inducing feelings of  anxiety a revelatory  addendum  intimate & immediate beguiling yet  singular with interesting glints &gleams TONES a scathing   ring of truth  indulging a kind of hope  with awkward revelations so  glamorous yet decadent debauched &reluctant in an intimate setting  of perception recast to intervene   & sought comfort of desire  so sweet — until tension was  present this closeness within the relationship of   intrigue so circumspect  & on  display yet  constructive & respectful. NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable. Copyright © Brian Strand

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