Focus
FOCUS
an artifice
of endeavour
precise
candid & confiding
quietly
in unobtrusive
clarity
a focus
mirrored in
unshowy
lucidity
in calm
equanimity
inducing
feelings of
anxiety
a
revelatory
addendum
intimate &
immediate
beguiling yet
singular
with
interesting
glints
&gleams
TONES
a scathing
ring of truth
indulging a
kind of hope
with awkward
revelations
so glamorous
yet
decadent debauched
&reluctant
in
an intimate setting
of perception
recast
to intervene
&
sought comfort
of desire
so sweet — until
tension was
present
this closeness
within
the
relationship
of
intrigue
so circumspect
& on display
yet
constructive &
respectful.
NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
Copyright © Brian Strand
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