Fntasized Love

her beauty just takes me everytime 
she so straight-forward just a straight line
she always letting me know if its really a good rhyme
or if not telling me if its a waste of time
a honest girl who has me captured photo
and every moment with her is in slo-mo
and magic is not a spark
because it lights more than the dark
if u could open our stomach 
you see the shine in our hearts
wat sets this love so apart
is that we both understand
that nothing other than to be each other's woman and man
and wat makes our love shine 
is every moment we make time
to get ourselves together
in case of bad weather 
so we know that it won't 
and that we'll b better 
and ready for the long run
cause with me and her everything's is going to be blast 
cause i know she ain't my first
but she is definitely my last
my soulmate is what she called
and i can't wait to walk down the hall
and establish that this is forever
and we are never goin to fall
i guess im trying to say that 
i want this to be a fact
and a dream that im having 
while laying down on back
if she stop hiding away
and if i could tell her what i need to say
that maybe she wouldn't be a ghost
and actually my dang way
so im be dreaming of you girl 
mayb until my dieing day
knowing i won't forget you
cause ur picture will never go away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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