Flying Up In the Skies

My dear , I don't know how shall I start
But my love for you was set before we met
I don't know how as it's deep in my heart
I believe that's crazy like Romeo's love for Juliet

Baby , my love for you is like a waterfall
I can't escape it but I must go down
I am addicted to your love , that's all
So don't hurt my heart and leave , It's a letdown

My pretty angel , I need you by my side
And from life , I wish nothing more
As you know that passion is my guide
And without you , nothing worth living for

Let's walk along the seashore till the dawn light
Holding hands , I wanna keep looking at your eyes
Baby , they are shinnig like the stars , so bright
With you , I feel I am flying up in the skies

Oh yeah , I feel I am flying up in the skies
I feel I am flying up in the skies

By: A. Badr
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A   Avatar
April 2, 2015 at 7:50 PM
Ahmed, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA
Mcdaid Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 7:22 PM
very beautifully painted piece
Mehta Avatar
August 21, 2014 at 5:39 AM
Congrats on the win,
Badr Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 10:57 AM
thanks :)
Lindley Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 10:37 PM
Congrats on your win!!
Badr Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 10:59 AM
thanks :)
Sietesantos Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 10:58 AM
Congratulations on a fine win!
Badr Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 10:56 AM
thanks
A   Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 9:40 AM
Ahmed, this poem, was a wrong entry. However, I gave you an Honorable mention... Hope you enjoy and take a look at the other winning poems... Congratulations!!! Thank you for the support, Stop by my latest blog, "You Sunk My "BATTLESHIP" :)" if you like. I enjoyed closing this contest. Always ~LINDA~
Badr Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 10:49 AM
Thanks but I don't understand that contradictory words , how am I supposed to win though it's a wrong entry?? and i don't understand what you mean by that blog
A   Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 8:12 PM
Ahmed, no problem... thank you for the reply
A   Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 6:14 PM
Ahmed, This happens to be an excellent poem, to have featured on the poetry soup's home page. Congratulations, enjoy having your poem featured this week. Always ~ LINDA ~
Badr Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 2:11 PM
Thanks PD , I am really so glad , I don't know what to say , I hope you like my next poems
Gibson Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 8:21 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Ahmed. I enjoyed reading this first poem you posted. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
Andresen Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 9:35 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Ahmed :) - I choose your first great written free verse - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Badr Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 1:10 PM
Thanks Anne , I hope you read more of my poems :)
A   Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 6:28 PM
Ha, Ahmed, I too am learning and taking a small break from writing a lot. I will check to see if you have another poem for me to enjoy..Linda
A   Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 5:58 PM
Hi Ahmed, , Thank you for the comment on my comment. I am looking forward, in hearing from you again. You will enjoy this site, I guaranteed or my fun poetry name isn't PD :) I highly recommend the blog area, there you can read what is hot, and what is going on here at The Poetry Soup. If you like click on some of the side features ((-UNDER- the area where it reads "Member Poets/Poems")) to the left of this comment. -That's my favorite soup section. If you scroll down to where it reads "Contests" you will enjoy the "Contest Winners: Member " feature. Click away, and check out what's cooking. Enjoy reading and following, many of the incoming winners. "I SURE DO." Please feel free to comment and read any of my poems, if you'd like. My poems are not the easiest to understand:) I'm still learning myself. However, I enjoy encouraging others. If you have any questions, feel free to ask. I might be able to help, if not I will recommend someone. Take Care~LINDA~
Badr Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 6:09 PM
Thanks so much for showing concern , I 'll be glad to see your comments on my poems. Sure I 'll read your poems , that 'll be an honor for me and 'll teach me much no doubt
A   Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 4:34 PM
Ahmed,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Badr Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 5:56 PM
Linda , Thanks for your support , I really appreciate it , I am glad to enter your contest , and it will be an honor for me if you followed me to read more poems , I have already written many poems and I 'll be glad to publish them on poetry soup
Sietesantos Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 3:19 PM
Hi Ahmed, this is such a beautiful, romantic write! Lovely piece which I enjoyed reading! Bravo!
Badr Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 3:49 PM
thanks Panadita for your encouragment
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