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Flying One On One

on a giant oak,
small birds are flapping their wings~
gearing for take-off
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Buehler Avatar
January 26, 2021 at 6:57 PM
There's such charming action and scenery in this well imagined haiku, Alexis. God Bless, Evelyn :=)
Bordner Avatar
January 26, 2021 at 11:37 AM
This is what makes haiku, Poetry to me...Alexis...J.A.B.
Trifiatis Avatar
January 26, 2021 at 5:56 AM
Delightful imagery, dearest Alexis! Hugs xxx
Buhagiar Avatar
January 26, 2021 at 5:20 AM
One can picture the scene. Loved it. ~~
Allison Avatar
January 26, 2021 at 4:59 AM
oh what wonderful imagery love it Alexis especially gearing for take off!:-) hugs Jan xx
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