Flying Mystery

as i glide in the in wind
     the clouds are so white
 i feel like i am blinded by a light
but as i glide farther through the clouds
   i see a shadow in the distance
      it moves as i move
              like if it were gliding in the same direction
                           the shadow seems like a statue
                                    just sitting at a far distance floating away
                                                 so i close my eyes and open them again
             the shadow is still there but it seems to be getting closer this time
as i glide closer and closer the shadow changes
and as it changes i see the form of a lady
i feel a breeze on the back of my neck 
              the clouds around me become to move faster and faster passed me
                                                               as i get close to this shadow like lady 
                                                       the clouds grow dark as she opens her eyes
                                                                 she holds out her hand out 
      her palm facing up and eyes white as the clouds once were
she doesnt say anything but its as if shes trying to save me 
i felt a thin air of wind glide across the back of my neck
                                        reaching for her hand i close my eyes 
                                                 i feel the touch of her hand and i open my eyes again
                                                                     the clouds are white again
                                 they start to fade away as the blue sky arises
holding this ladies hand, the clouds fade under my feet
i fall as she falls.........still floating in mid air
and falling in love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Montgomery Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 10:59 AM
This is very Beautiful Devon!!! I mean it, this is extremely wonderful :)
Culverhouse Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 5:20 PM
lovely poem, enjoyed
Loveless Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 10:58 AM
Wow, thats epic. Brilliant words....it sort of captures you in a story like spell. Always .:Rain:.
Smith Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 2:57 PM
Ayy bro this is sickkk!!!! keep it up dog!
Chebukina Avatar
March 18, 2010 at 1:09 PM
Devon, You are to hard on yourself. Your writing is as good as everyone here. You put feeling into your writing, and thats what every poet should do. if you need any help just contact me at [email protected] i would be glad to help.^_^ Much Respecft, Anna
Moon Avatar
March 16, 2010 at 12:36 PM
its a very interesting poem...don't worry about whether or not you know how to do poetry...its a matter of fact that you can express your creativity through words in whatever form you want...godd job and keep up the great work...God Bless...-Brittany-
Brown Avatar
March 16, 2010 at 5:36 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Devon. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Culverhouse Avatar
March 15, 2010 at 5:12 PM
welcome to poetry soup, hope you enjoy writing, and continue to share with us. enjoyed reading today.
Bathsheba Avatar
March 15, 2010 at 2:47 PM
Interesting write Devon - I like it - Thankyou for sharing -:)
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