Sara Kendrick Poet Enclosed Rhyme

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I started writing a sonnet just one for fun then had to lay it down to do something for a family member then my sonnet took a turn that I had not anticipated..Sara

Flying Free

Pastel Easter dresses on morn's sunrise
After a long cold windy spring night
But now the golden sun is shining bright
Giving promise of all day sunny skies

Baby pears adorn the Barlett pear tree
Blueberries hang on the Blueberry bush
Pale pink rose that on trellis grows has blush
Baby birds in lined snug nest waiting to fly free

Free as baby bird flying free what freedom 
No more excess chores to occupy day
Just to sit close to Him to forever stay
Fly away freedom from pain nor more serfdom

Promise of beautiful day externally
Promise of free life eternally

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Samia Ali Salama April 27, 2012 at 5:35 PM I love your descriptions in this poem Sara. You painted a beautiful rhyme here ...Samia

Chittaranjan Dey April 27, 2012 at 12:47 AM Nice my dear beautiful poetess.

Elizabeth Wesley April 26, 2012 at 4:50 PM Oh to have wings, Last two lines are a clever way to end this lovely verse!

Joe Maverick April 26, 2012 at 3:13 AM Really enjoyed this enclosed rhyme poem Sara, and i have sent you soup mail..)

Joseph May April 25, 2012 at 7:21 PM nicely done Sara..regards...Joseph

Andrea Dietrich April 25, 2012 at 4:29 PM sara, this is one of your best poems. Very descriptive and pretty.

Carolyn Devonshire April 25, 2012 at 3:20 PM I read your "about this poem" and you do have a unique sonnet style here, Sara. While reading it, I was caught up in the images of the blueberries, birds, flowerw and the Bartlett pear tree with baby pears on it. Thank you for taking me on this flight of freedom! Love, Carolyn

Tim B April 25, 2012 at 3:05 PM Beautiful poem to go with a beautiful picture Mrs. Sara. Sometimes I wish I could fly like this. The time will come, until then I am becoming more and more content to bide my time in his service by encouraging others to be ready to sprout wings when their time comes. Lovely poetry, you had a nice rhythm and your end rhymes were tactful. I liked the third stanza immensely, but the second one had great imagery as well.

John Rhinem April 25, 2012 at 2:19 PM Smile ~ This Is A Very Picturesque & Beautiful Painting, Beautiful Sara ~ Love Always, John!:) ~

Kash Poet April 25, 2012 at 12:43 PM Excellent imagery here Sara.Wonderful lines penned by you in this poem.Enjoyed.