Yanny Widjanarko Poet Rhyme

Fly Me To Your Moon

Dancing on the empty floor
Dear, I want you for more
We seek through our sight
Tonight, I let you by my side

Your eyes like an ocean
You drown me deep by your motion
Our body sway without a music
But the heart beat remain as the acoustic

Lost in lust we caught by the moon
The tick tock time moving like too soon
Symptoms of passion forced to be awake
Our lips closer like unwillingly to await

Twinkle twinkle shiny star
Be the glimmer of our night
We find our selves in bizarre
You do me wrong but I felt it right

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John Posey March 20, 2013 at 4:50 PM Lots of creativity here. You bring a very subtle non-offensive eroticism into play.... Well done..... Jake Yanny Widjanarko May 9, 2013 at 6:54 PM Thank you John, glad to have your visit here :D hug, yanny

Opondi Ougo February 14, 2013 at 4:23 AM wow...You do me right..and i feel right...what a piece :-) Yanny Widjanarko February 14, 2013 at 7:54 AM Thank yoi Word craft :) happy Valentine's day :D

Sukmawati Komala February 13, 2013 at 5:43 PM Hy my my sweetest girl :) i love this poem.. very beautifully written :) Happy Valentine dearest one <3 <3 <3 Sk Yanny Widjanarko February 13, 2013 at 5:53 PM Happy Valentines Day too :D dear Sukmawati :D, I am very greatful to see you today :D, thank you for your lovely comment, it colors my day :D - hug, yanny

Anne-Lise Andresen February 11, 2013 at 5:38 AM - Romantic travel Yanny .... love it. - Good luck - come back soon ... Have a lovely new week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Yanny Widjanarko February 11, 2013 at 9:31 AM Thank you Anne, lovely comment by a lovely person :) - hug, yanny

Andrea Dietrich February 5, 2013 at 11:39 PM that is such a cool line: you did me wrong but I felt it right. It kind of reminds me of that cool song: hurts so good! Wonderful poetry theme ,, Yanny. Yanny Widjanarko February 6, 2013 at 8:13 AM Thank you Andrea, :D actually this poem was also inspired by a jazz song, but i forgot the title, one of the lyric said, "do me wrong, do me right.." :D wishing you a wonderful day Andrea - hug, yanny

Richard Lamoureux February 5, 2013 at 8:44 AM Wow, very sexy piece! Delightful write. Sweet dreams , or perhaps you are to busy to sleep *lol* Yanny Widjanarko February 5, 2013 at 4:59 PM Lol, I am busy with my night for sure Rick :p hehehe, thank you for your delightful comment too Rick :D have a great night :D