Fly In the Soup - Repost

There is a fly in the soup that just won't leave....
He taunts and taunts but barely makes a breeze...
Now there is a disruption at the table for those who write...
Must take this fly outside for a one sided fight...
Shoo fly shoo fly your day has come to an end...
You pushed a few too many poets, but this one wouldn't bend...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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August 17, 2012 at 8:01 PM
Michael..that is no spice... lol..hope the fly drowns.... xox..pd
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August 17, 2012 at 7:42 PM
I LOVE IT!!! Now lets SWAT him for good... Cory
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August 17, 2012 at 3:00 PM
Ha ha, this a wonderful poem my friend! I really enjoyed reading this creative piece this afternoon! What a special and tremendous piece Michael! Great Work!!
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August 17, 2012 at 2:36 PM
Flies are so nasty,dirthy and very troblesome!!!! .....belong in cows ass !!!! - re- read it ....and will do it again....and again... - Thank you Michael. - oxox // Anne-Lise
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August 17, 2012 at 2:23 PM
Yes its Michael the Leader of the Witch Hunt. See my blog and post your feelings.
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