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Fly Away - Waltz Wave

Fly
birdie
fly.
Spread your
wings and soar.
The time 
has
come to
leave the nest,
your destiny
awaits. Fly
birdie
fly.
Spread your
wings, catch the
wind and
heed
freedom's 
call.

6/21/15

Entered in Skat's Any Old Poem #9 contest

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Kelly Deschler

July 20, 2015 at 12:43 AM

I like the inspiring message in this charming poem. Nicely written, Kim! Congrats on the win!

Kim Merryman

July 20, 2015 at 4:49 PM

Thank you so much, Kelly!

Skat A

July 13, 2015 at 12:20 AM

Kim, thank you for the support... SKAT

Kim Merryman

July 20, 2015 at 4:48 PM

Thank you, Skat, for my placement in your contest!

Andrea Dietrich

July 12, 2015 at 12:38 AM

I love the way this one moves which is how I see the wave poem being. It's all about the movement and the beautiful words!

Kim Merryman

July 20, 2015 at 4:48 PM

Thank you, Andrea! I appreciate your encouraging words!

Sneha Rv

June 28, 2015 at 3:12 AM

This is really lovely!! I loved this!! :D :D

Kim Merryman

June 28, 2015 at 3:24 PM

Thank you so much, Sneha!

Daver Austin

June 25, 2015 at 1:33 PM

The rapture that comes with the dance takes wing, eh. Love, it. daver

Kim Merryman

June 28, 2015 at 3:23 PM

Thank you, Daver! Appreciate the visit!

Nette Onclaud

June 22, 2015 at 2:58 PM

this soars, kim... i like this form and am glad you cited my piece in your contest.. thanks and huggs!

Kim Merryman

June 24, 2015 at 9:20 PM

Thank you, Nette! I appreciate you stopping by and commenting.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

June 21, 2015 at 11:16 PM

A lovely, inspiring write, Kim! Hugs, Rhonda

Kim Merryman

June 24, 2015 at 9:19 PM

Thank you, Rhonda! I appreciate your comments.

Alexis Y.

June 21, 2015 at 3:15 PM

This is beautiful Kim. Its a joy to see the different forms you create. I love how you penned of a bird flying to its freedom. I used have flying dream often and can I recall the feeling being free(not a care in the world). Excellent job. Thanks for sharing:) Alexis

Kim Merryman

June 24, 2015 at 9:17 PM

Thank you, Alexis! Actually I haven't personally created any forms myself. I find them on other poetry sites and try them out.

Jan Allison

June 21, 2015 at 1:49 PM

I do like this simple form Kim - I see my son as a bird now he has gone to university he is free to spread his wings and fly:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Merryman

June 24, 2015 at 9:12 PM

I'm glad you could relate to my poem, Jan. Thanks for stopping by and I appreciate your comment.

Leo Larry Amadore

June 21, 2015 at 1:25 PM

In my childhood, I frequently fantasized that I could fly --- running, jumping into the air, I was airborne for a short time. And that was one of my favorite activities, especially after having seen a screening of the Peter Pan movie. I never wanted to grow up (and I'm still not sure I ever did.) I enjoyed your poem.

Kim Merryman

June 24, 2015 at 9:10 PM

I think all kids are fascinated with flying. My husband doesn't want to grow up either. Thanks for stopping by and I'm glad you liked my poem.