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Fluttering Darkness

Fluttering darkness, take wing. Malignant talons, take life. Oblivion wings, take light. Pluck from the shade, this foul feeling manmade, without a reason or rhyme. Execrable expression of earthly emptiness, Detestable display of dauntless devotion, Perverse parade of practical pretence, Irreverent instance of intrepid insurgence. "Only faith may absolve you" But "darkness", launching into freedom's embrace, need not be forgiven nor freed

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Date: 5/24/2022 12:05:00 PM
Interesting and creative, Michael; theuse of alliteration leaves a striking mark. Regards // paul
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Michael Whatley
Date: 5/30/2022 6:25:00 PM
Thank you Paul, I spent a lot of time looking at the thesaurus!
Date: 5/23/2022 6:49:00 AM
Your word choice is great. I liked it. It will surely win you contests. Blessings!
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Michael Whatley
Date: 5/23/2022 7:17:00 AM
Thank you, Paghunda! I spent a lot of time on the alliteration.

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