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Flutter To Beauty

a chilly morning - -
light snow falls onto apple 
blossom on the ground 

for Rick's contest
theme: to flutter in beauty

seasonshaiku

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Paul Callus

Date: 2/27/2018 11:50:00 AM

You have projected a delightful image, Jack....fluttering snow and blossom are eye-catching. Regards // paul

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/26/2017 2:48:00 PM

Hi Jack, a beautiful and delicate Haiku that I can see and feel. The expression is gorgeous. Thank you for commenting on my poem Hot Summer Day as well, very kind of you :)

Eve Roper

Date: 5/13/2017 8:05:00 PM

Very nice poem, Jack, I miss those chilly mornings instead of the heat... ~*

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/10/2017 4:38:00 PM

I can picture those apples on the ground. It is a lovely spring day and just got home from the dentist. Need a tooth pulled but will do it next month as I have had so much done lately. Joys of getting old. love phyl

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 5/5/2017 9:05:00 AM

Ooh that sounds cold, beautiful (and very visual, I like the pink blossom against the white), but still cold.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/26/2017 5:20:00 AM

The blossoms and the snow flakes both flutter like a butterfly. This is lovely Jack! 7 ; )

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/23/2017 1:22:00 PM

Poor apple blossoms and baby apples..Reads like a winner..Thanks for the visits to my page..Poison ivy looks like English Ivy that runs up walls and on trellis but the sap of the leaves, stems, and the roots are poisonous to some people some say all people but my husband has never reacted to it..The fumes or smoke of it burning can cause breaking out, swelling of the nasal passages, throat, and lungs which can be deadly for some..It has three leaves but five sisters which is non-poisonous has SK

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/23/2017 1:24:00 PM

five leaves but they are hard to tell apart when they are tiny plants..There is also poison oak which has rounded leaves but I am not real familiar with it and also poisonous sumac..You definitely don't want to mess with poisonous sumac..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/22/2017 8:16:00 PM

Wonderful, Jack. It's always great to see you here!!

Jan Allison

Date: 4/22/2017 5:38:00 PM

oh so beautiful Jack it reminds me ... I saw a wonderful prog on BBC2 yesterday on the sakura blossoms in Japan - was absolutely stunning:-) hugs Jan xx

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