Flushed Face of Morning

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                 a feverish sun

           lifts the shroud of meadow mist

             dawn wakes with bright eyes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/16/2018 10:14:00 PM
Lovely and delightful imagery, Carrie.
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Date: 4/26/2010 5:50:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie!! Enjoy your win in the contest!! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 4/26/2010 11:22:00 AM
Congratulations on # 6 Carrie. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/26/2010 5:39:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in the Nature's Breath contest... lovely words of perfection to describe the awesome photo.. enjoy your special win..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 4/26/2010 3:42:00 AM
Carrie, congratulations on your success in my Nature's Breath contest...Raul
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Date: 4/26/2010 3:19:00 AM
Great picture:a feverish sun! Enjoyed reading it today and thank you for commenting Late Spring Explosion...Have a nice week ahead...Love, Gert
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Date: 4/25/2010 11:03:00 PM
wow, very interesting. I am sure it will be right up there. At first I was not sure if it was dawn or end of day. It could be either one I think! Great imagery as usual, Carrie. LUv, andrea
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Date: 4/25/2010 10:49:00 PM
love it harry j horsman
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Date: 4/25/2010 10:04:00 PM
Original view Carrie,much enjoyed......Charma
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Date: 4/25/2010 7:07:00 PM
very nice entry Carrie, " a feverish sun" what a creative thought!!!! good luck my friend!
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