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Flushed Face of Morning

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                 a feverish sun

           lifts the shroud of meadow mist

             dawn wakes with bright eyes

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Line Gauthier

April 16, 2018 at 10:14 PM

Lovely and delightful imagery, Carrie.

Audrey Haick

April 26, 2010 at 5:50 PM

Congratulations Carrie!! Enjoy your win in the contest!! Peace, Audrey

John Freeman

April 26, 2010 at 11:22 AM

Congratulations on # 6 Carrie. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 26, 2010 at 5:39 AM

Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in the Nature's Breath contest... lovely words of perfection to describe the awesome photo.. enjoy your special win..luv.. Linda-Marie

Raul Moreno

April 26, 2010 at 3:42 AM

Carrie, congratulations on your success in my Nature's Breath contest...Raul

Gert W. Knop

April 26, 2010 at 3:19 AM

Great picture:a feverish sun! Enjoyed reading it today and thank you for commenting Late Spring Explosion...Have a nice week ahead...Love, Gert

Andrea Dietrich

April 25, 2010 at 11:03 PM

wow, very interesting. I am sure it will be right up there. At first I was not sure if it was dawn or end of day. It could be either one I think! Great imagery as usual, Carrie. LUv, andrea