Fluffy Marshmallows

The fluffy white clouds
Are spreading coolness and shade;
Relief from the sun.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Neal Avatar
December 18, 2008 at 1:24 PM
Nice haiku, clouds do look like marshmallows. DN
Moreno Avatar
December 18, 2008 at 2:27 AM
Great imagery Caramel, I can relate to the vision you are pulling from. You are a Master of the short verse...Raul
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