Fluffy Kitty

*Author's note
Cute fun poem instead of my usual serious stuff. I've been told that this was more of a Iambic style poem by a friend that helped to add a few words here and there to make the poem flow more. If I'm mistaken, then please tell me the correct form that my poem is. Anyways, Enjoy :)


Fluffy kitty,
Sleepy kitty,
Little ball of fur; 
Patting gently,
Scritching softly,
Listen to the purr.

Dangle string and
Watch it swing,
See the kitty sway;
Eyes will follow,
Mind goes hollow,
Focused on its prey.

Feel legs bunch and
Muscles coil,
See the kitty pounce;
She stands aloof,
With string in mouth,
Oh, that prideful flounce!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 10/28/2023 5:29:00 PM
nice Caleb
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Date: 1/2/2018 1:13:00 AM
You strung that one together purrfectly Caleb. Sorry I have not dropped in for a while. Hope your Christmas went well and your prospects for the New Year are excellent. I really thought your poem was rather good. Best regards David
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Date: 11/6/2017 8:59:00 PM
This one has got me purring. Cats can be naughty too though. Our cat likes to play tricks on us. Good to catch up with your workagin. Regards David
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Date: 10/16/2017 8:36:00 AM
what a cute poem Caleb:-) I shy away from writing iambic pentameter so i can't comment on that aspect but the poem is delightful:-) hugs jan xx
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Caleb Lawrence
Date: 10/16/2017 10:14:00 AM
Thank you!! I wanted to make it cute, so mission accomplished. :) Hugs
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