Fluffy Kitty

*Author's note
Cute fun poem instead of my usual serious stuff. I've been told that this was more of a Iambic style poem by a friend that helped to add a few words here and there to make the poem flow more. If I'm mistaken, then please tell me the correct form that my poem is. Anyways, Enjoy :)


Fluffy kitty,
Sleepy kitty,
Little ball of fur; 
Patting gently,
Scritching softly,
Listen to the purr.

Dangle string and
Watch it swing,
See the kitty sway;
Eyes will follow,
Mind goes hollow,
Focused on its prey.

Feel legs bunch and
Muscles coil,
See the kitty pounce;
She stands aloof,
With string in mouth,
Oh, that prideful flounce!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Wood Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 5:29 PM
nice Caleb
Smith Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 1:13 AM
You strung that one together purrfectly Caleb. Sorry I have not dropped in for a while. Hope your Christmas went well and your prospects for the New Year are excellent. I really thought your poem was rather good. Best regards David
Smith Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 8:59 PM
This one has got me purring. Cats can be naughty too though. Our cat likes to play tricks on us. Good to catch up with your workagin. Regards David
Allison Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 8:36 AM
what a cute poem Caleb:-) I shy away from writing iambic pentameter so i can't comment on that aspect but the poem is delightful:-) hugs jan xx
Lawrence Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 10:14 AM
Thank you!! I wanted to make it cute, so mission accomplished. :) Hugs
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