Flowing Water

A raging river,
Cutting through the canyon walls,
As it carves a path
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
December 17, 2010 at 8:32 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Rick, Erica
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December 17, 2010 at 8:04 AM
Erica, it was during the last Ice Age that the stone formations of Yosemite National Park were created. Your poem reminded me of the beauty the glaciers left behind. Water is quite a sculptor! Congratulations on your win. Best wishes, Carolyn
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December 17, 2010 at 7:29 AM
Congrats Erica on your big win in Rick's contest with this exciting entry on flowing water .. enjoy with luv..today..
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2010 at 10:00 PM
Good one. Congratulations on your win, Erica!
Onclaud Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 11:44 AM
well-scribed 'ku, erica.. enjoyed this one.. lots of luck in the contest! warmest, nette
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December 13, 2010 at 11:20 AM
Clever Haiku - well done! Liz
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December 13, 2010 at 11:09 AM
Absolutely beautiful images that you have put in the minds of your readers! Lots of Love, ~Misty~
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