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Flowing Water

A raging river, Cutting through the canyon walls, As it carves a path

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/17/2010 8:32:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Rick, Erica

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/17/2010 8:04:00 AM

Erica, it was during the last Ice Age that the stone formations of Yosemite National Park were created. Your poem reminded me of the beauty the glaciers left behind. Water is quite a sculptor! Congratulations on your win. Best wishes, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/17/2010 7:29:00 AM

Congrats Erica on your big win in Rick's contest with this exciting entry on flowing water .. enjoy with luv..today..

Rick Parise

Date: 12/16/2010 10:03:00 PM

Congrats on your WIN~!!!!!!!Great job~Enjoyed~Rick

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/16/2010 10:00:00 PM

Good one. Congratulations on your win, Erica!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/13/2010 11:44:00 AM

well-scribed 'ku, erica.. enjoyed this one.. lots of luck in the contest! warmest, nette

Liz Walsh

Date: 12/13/2010 11:20:00 AM

Clever Haiku - well done! Liz

Misty Penton-Leccese

Date: 12/13/2010 11:09:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful images that you have put in the minds of your readers! Lots of Love, ~Misty~