Flowing Tears

Contour of her tears Flow down her wet enhanced cheek… Grey clouds spill some rain Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 7:42 PM
THe last line is wonderful. Love how it goes with the tears.
Horne Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 2:59 PM
lovely senyru. Russell
Andresen Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 6:14 AM
- Proficient written, Russell ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mehta Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 4:40 AM
Nice images, Russell
Onclaud Avatar
January 25, 2014 at 5:26 PM
fascinating way to create a senryu with a twust in the end, russell... so much meaning in a few wrods... a lovely way to sart my day by reasing this one... grrreat stuff!... huggs
Kayode Avatar
January 25, 2014 at 2:50 PM
Good one Russell,the poet in you lives. Kudos. Kayod5
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January 25, 2014 at 7:44 AM
The weather matches the mood...Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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