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Flowing River

water cooled smoke blows inspiration’s river flows .... thickness of smoke grows

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Wandering Butterfly

Date: 3/17/2011 8:03:00 AM

GOOD RHYOMING ROBB, I am adding this to my Favs.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/16/2011 9:26:00 PM

luv the rhyme my friend.. always .. a wonderful flow from your flowing river Robb..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/16/2011 9:25:00 PM

so glad u enjoy "...for the POETRY" Robb .. it was written as an expression of the main reason for this great site .. glad to see u are now a PM luv and sponsoring your first contest.. good luck.. it is very exciting to go through the contest process so enjoy luv.. going to enter now..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2011 3:26:00 PM

REminds me of the old steamships they had on the Mississippi, (well that I read about. I'm not quite that old. hahaha) and Mississippi was a great river to grow up next to!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/14/2011 6:39:00 AM

Super images Robb and wonderful rhyme too .. enjoyed to start my day of poetry ..luv..

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/13/2011 8:26:00 PM

I can relate this to the Japanese tragedy, a thought provoking Senryu this. Harry