Flowing River

water cooled smoke blows
inspiration’s river flows ....
thickness of smoke grows
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Butterfly Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 8:03 AM
GOOD RHYOMING ROBB, I am adding this to my Favs.
Sweetheart Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 9:26 PM
luv the rhyme my friend.. always .. a wonderful flow from your flowing river Robb..
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March 16, 2011 at 9:25 PM
so glad u enjoy "...for the POETRY" Robb .. it was written as an expression of the main reason for this great site .. glad to see u are now a PM luv and sponsoring your first contest.. good luck.. it is very exciting to go through the contest process so enjoy luv.. going to enter now..
Dietrich Avatar
March 14, 2011 at 3:26 PM
REminds me of the old steamships they had on the Mississippi, (well that I read about. I'm not quite that old. hahaha) and Mississippi was a great river to grow up next to!
Sweetheart Avatar
March 14, 2011 at 6:39 AM
Super images Robb and wonderful rhyme too .. enjoyed to start my day of poetry ..luv..
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March 13, 2011 at 8:26 PM
I can relate this to the Japanese tragedy, a thought provoking Senryu this. Harry
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