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Flowing

Flowing Minichu

Flowing like sunrise light
and moonlight combining, to become love light 
to my sight

shining for me~
always shining to give insight
to me~

always
the pathway’s bright
gaze 

flowing like sunrise light
always shining to give insight,
gaze!
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Goldsmith Avatar
January 31, 2026 at 1:35 PM
I enjoyed reading your lovely "Flowing Minichu" write. Great Picture... Have a blessed day/weekend writing away............
Achara Avatar
January 31, 2026 at 1:39 PM
Thank you. Minichu are always challenging to write.
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