Flowing Downwards

Glide with me
down through blue coral mounds,
froth of your wavelets  bathes my shoulders

with a cloak
draping my moistened arms
as we glitter like translucent stars;

till notes float
where  cool pleasure ripples--
drenching hungry bodies on the grass

like a bend
spread in caves  of delight
rowing with gentle moans of one tide.



Some Form Of Crystalline
Submitted by Amelie Mara--- 26 Oct 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Callus Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 2:43 PM
Lovely...with expressive imagery where pleasure ripples and flows seductively. A very worthy winner in Nette's contest...congratulations! // paul
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 8:08 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem Amelia.
Mehta Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 4:18 AM
Nice imagery, congrats on the win, Amelia
Onclaud Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 1:46 AM
water of sensuality marks this flowing write, amelie...your last line is defining!..thank you for being part of my contest and huge congrats!
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 6, 2014 at 11:13 PM
Amelie, Wow! Passion flows through every line of this winning piece! Fantastic win and much deserved!
Dietrich Avatar
November 6, 2014 at 9:49 PM
this is a gorgeous and romantic poem. Glad I am getting to see it on the winners' list tonight. Congrats. GREAT imagery.
Squyres Avatar
November 6, 2014 at 9:09 PM
Wow !!! Simply splendid with a beautiful erotic moment set now in time with each line. Wonderful take on the theme... all I've read so far have been. Congratulations on your win !!
Yvonne Avatar
November 6, 2014 at 6:40 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win for this excellent take on a waterfall.
Allison Avatar
November 6, 2014 at 3:20 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Allison Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 4:59 PM
simply stunning imagery - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xxx
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