Flowery Seduction

seduced by nectar
beckoned by fragrant beauty
hovers in  delight


arrayed  like precious gems
seducing with nectar
sways to acquiesce



              
                  By: Joseph May
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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May 1, 2012 at 8:16 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Sweet Flowers & Hummingbirds" contest Joseph. Love, Carol
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May 3, 2012 at 1:09 PM
thank you Carol
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April 27, 2012 at 3:26 PM
Great work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats on your win..Sara
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May 3, 2012 at 1:08 PM
thank you Sara
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April 27, 2012 at 8:34 AM
Congratulations Joseph!! on your win..."sways to acqiesce" O' what a line! love it! thank you for your kindness and encouragement...big hugs, love ~deb
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May 3, 2012 at 1:08 PM
thanks Deb, I am glad you liked it
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April 25, 2012 at 11:52 AM
..Congratulations with your wonderful win,,, ... ;-) always~PD
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April 25, 2012 at 7:22 PM
thank you PD
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April 24, 2012 at 11:21 PM
Congrats on your win Joseph.Very nice!!
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April 25, 2012 at 7:23 PM
thanks Kash
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April 24, 2012 at 9:49 PM
congrats with your wonderful win' Siddy
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April 25, 2012 at 7:23 PM
Thank you Siddy
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April 18, 2012 at 10:11 AM
VERY nice Joseph!
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April 25, 2012 at 7:24 PM
thank you Samia
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April 16, 2012 at 12:31 PM
beautiful write - i have one of these gems outside my window as I write this.
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April 25, 2012 at 7:22 PM
thanks Ann
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April 14, 2012 at 9:33 PM
Joseph, sounds and flutters with sweetness.. nectar.. the weakness, of the flying gem... I truly love the seductive image in your haiku's... good luck in the contest.. always~ PD
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May 3, 2012 at 1:10 PM
Thanks PD
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April 14, 2012 at 8:40 PM
Hi, Joseph. I like the title of this pair. Nice S alliteration too.
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May 3, 2012 at 1:09 PM
thank you Andrea
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