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Flowers

Flowers Pretty fragrant Fading, waiting, dying Wilting all the while limp Gardens

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Marc Acrich

Date: 4/22/2018 3:28:00 PM

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/26/2018 5:53:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely comment. have a nice evening my friend.

Derek Noble Ayi

Date: 10/10/2017 6:49:00 AM

hmmnnn, it has a mixed feeling . How I wish the fragrance of the flower will stay for a longer period. Life is like that . It's a good piece, keep it up Darlene. God bless you

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/10/2017 7:28:00 AM

Hello Derek. yes it would be nice if the fragrance of the flowers would stay longer. You are right life is like that.Have a nice day

Jan Allison

Date: 9/13/2017 3:06:00 PM

I see it all the time with my plants Darlene but many will produce seeds or re grow another year and the cycle continues for many years:-) hugs jan xx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/13/2017 3:13:00 PM

Hello Jan, it is so sad to see the flowers die off this time of year Glad to hear that some plants produce seeds for growing again nest year. Have a nice day my friend.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/10/2017 3:00:00 AM

Well done for trying out new forms, Darlene. It's a pity that lovely flowers can't last forever, but we can always look forward to enjoying new ones! Best regards // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/10/2017 11:50:00 AM

Thank you Paul, yes it is a good idea to try out new ideas. Have a nice day my cfriend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/10/2017 11:39:00 AM

Thank you Paul, yes I am tryng out new forms. So far so good. If I get it wrong someone will tell me. i hope. Have a nice day my friend.

Charlie Smith

Date: 9/6/2017 8:01:00 PM

So good to see you trying different forms Darlene, keep up the good work...

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/10/2017 11:51:00 AM

Thank you Charlie, yes I am trying out new ideas now. let me know how i do. have a nice day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/7/2017 10:30:00 AM

Yes I am trying to try something different. So I can have choices when writing poetry. Have a nice day my friend.

Carol B.

Date: 9/6/2017 5:28:00 PM

So sad to see the flowers die. Hopefully you had a nice summer and were able to enjoy their beauty. :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/7/2017 10:32:00 AM

Yes I had a nice summer, thank you. I hope you did to. It is sad to see the flowers dying. have a nice day my friend.

Silent One

Date: 9/6/2017 11:48:00 AM

Very nice Darlene..

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/6/2017 2:57:00 PM

Thank you Silent One. Have a nice day my friend.

Joseph May

Date: 9/6/2017 11:07:00 AM

Very nice Cinquain Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/6/2017 2:50:00 PM

Hello Joseph,Thank you.

Alfred Berggren

Date: 9/6/2017 10:08:00 AM

Flowers make the garden beautiful. It takes water to keep them that way.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/6/2017 2:59:00 PM

Yes you are right, but now itis getting cooler and the flowers can not take the cool air -so they start to die. Have anice day my friend.

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/6/2017 8:41:00 AM

Hi Darlene, You created a sad yet beautiful scene in a few words. Well done:-) Alexis

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/6/2017 2:51:00 PM

Thank you Alex, I would rather have summer be the longer season.

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/5/2017 5:47:00 PM

Oh so sad, but written well Darlene. I can see it clearly :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/6/2017 7:56:00 AM

Hello Heidi, I see this happening every day. So sad. Have a nice day myfrend.