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Flowers

Flowers
                Pretty fragrant
                Fading, waiting, dying
                Wilting all the while limp
                            Gardens

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Marc Acrich

April 22, 2018 at 3:28 PM

Darlene De Beaulieu

April 26, 2018 at 5:53 PM

Thank you for your lovely comment. have a nice evening my friend.

Derek Noble Ayi

October 10, 2017 at 6:49 AM

hmmnnn, it has a mixed feeling . How I wish the fragrance of the flower will stay for a longer period. Life is like that . It's a good piece, keep it up Darlene. God bless you

Darlene De Beaulieu

October 10, 2017 at 7:28 AM

Hello Derek. yes it would be nice if the fragrance of the flowers would stay longer. You are right life is like that.Have a nice day

Jan Allison

September 13, 2017 at 3:06 PM

I see it all the time with my plants Darlene but many will produce seeds or re grow another year and the cycle continues for many years:-) hugs jan xx

Darlene De Beaulieu

September 13, 2017 at 3:13 PM

Hello Jan, it is so sad to see the flowers die off this time of year Glad to hear that some plants produce seeds for growing again nest year. Have a nice day my friend.

Paul Callus

September 10, 2017 at 3:00 AM

Well done for trying out new forms, Darlene. It's a pity that lovely flowers can't last forever, but we can always look forward to enjoying new ones! Best regards // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu

September 10, 2017 at 11:50 AM

Thank you Paul, yes it is a good idea to try out new ideas. Have a nice day my cfriend.

Darlene De Beaulieu

September 10, 2017 at 11:39 AM

Thank you Paul, yes I am tryng out new forms. So far so good. If I get it wrong someone will tell me. i hope. Have a nice day my friend.